Evaluation of 2D Animation

When I had finished my 2D animation of 'Dave Advert', I showed it to various people in my class. I asked them what they liked, disliked and how I could improve my animation.

The majority of the people I had shown my animation to had enjoyed it very much.

'I thought it was a good animation overall, I really liked it.'

Since the majority of people enjoyed my animation, I had decided that I had succeeded in creating a 2D animation for my Dave advert that people can enjoy.

I had no idea what I would make for my 2D animation. I knew I wanted to make a cut-out animation because it was the one I most enjoyed doing. Since I was having trouble figuring out what my second animation would be I decided to ask a fellow peer for help. This lead to her helping me make a list of all my favourite things so it was easier to make my decision. I then decided to make a cut-out advert for my favourite channel 'Dave'. The channel, I think, wants to be the best channel, thus I was enthralled with the idea of having cut out pictures depicting shows to fight each other. Then finishing off with a voice over telling people that Dave are 'Fighting to be the Best'. 

I enjoyed making my 2D animation. I most liked the idea as a whole. I like that I have made them 'fight' by hitting each other off. The music I think worked well as I used the rocky theme, since rocky is a fighting film. The sound effect I used when they hit each other is a punching sound. I disliked the fact that with the pictures I used, you wouldn't understand half of them unless you had seen the programme and it wasn't that smooth. This was further emphasised when I had a comment saying the same.
'I would have made it a bit more shorter, bit more snappier.'

Even with these improvements needed, my animation was still enjoyed.

'I really liked how it fir the specifications of the usual advertising for Dave's Channel.'

'The sound effects went with the advert to advertise Dave, I thought it was a very good advert.'